I do have respect for those with such talents, and the blogging world offers some excellent poets.
Three of my favorites are Brian at WaystationOne, Jinksy at Napplenotes, and Joanny at LiveDreamLove.
So, instead of me struggling to create a verse that touches the soul but getting stuck on "violets are blue...", I offer the following from another odist, Eugene Peterson, that had the desired impact on me:
A beech tree in winter, white
Intricacies unconcealed
Against sky blue and billowed
Clouds, carries in his emptiness
Ripeness: sap ready to rise
On signal, buds alert to burst
To leaf. And then after a season
Of summer a lean ring to remember
The lush fulfilled promises.
Empty again in wise poverty
That lets the reaching branches stretch
A millimeter more towards heaven,
The bole expands ever so slightly
And push roots into the firm
Foundation, lucky to be leafless:
Deciduous reminder to let it go.

16 comments:
That poem might have been written for my latest In Tandem 'painting'! I'm honoured to be on your list, Blogpal.:) Thanks ♥
Wow that is a beautiful poem!
I love it! I'm a fan of that lean style - not all cluttered up with useless words, but evocative.
ah so sweet, thanks for the honorable mention -- a beautiful poem you posted --
the inherent exuberance
of nature keeping time
with the seasons,
everything adjusts
and comes
to a new balance.
joanny
very nice...like the poem....and for the company you put me in, i am honored...i have high respect for each of these ladies...
Beautiful.
Nice!
Slamdunk:
Nicely presented.
Always enjoy some good prose.
Stay safe.
Love a good poem to start the day off right. Thanks!
From fantasy football to poetry. Quite the Renaissance Man, aren't you?! :-)
This makes me think of the bad poetry I wrote in hs...
Thanks for the poetry links. Poetry helps me to express my thoughts and feelings in a way like none other.
I bet you could stream of consciousness your way through a poem, Slamdunk. Enjoyed this one, too.
Beautiful poem.
All Poems & Poets are just simply beautiful...
Beautiful poems come form a beautiful heart!
Thank you Slam Dunk and all Poets.
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